Tabari Harith

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"Name:" Tabari Harith
"Age:"17
"Family:" Mixed; Shibahu with svatantra appearance artificially born by the Sitala process of creating childeren
"Occupation:" still in school; aspiring architect; helps in the fields
"likes:" Animals, mythology, stories of the old homeland, dreaming about finding a new home, cooking, Girls, clubbing, Shiny things, competing, comparing mods, sparring, money, and any other things most teenagers indulge in/have greed for
"dislikes:" People who are intolerant to others, most food toppings, shallow people
***Backstory

Tabari was not born from love or from the want of childeren but instead from curiosity a wealthy Sitala family obsessed with the taboos that the Sitala despise so much went against the laws as all communities have revolt, they wanted to create a child with mods of mixed cultures, why not just look at the children in the mixed region? most asked they wanted to create their own custom child strangely enough it worked beautifully however the mods were extremely limited due to the complex systems in his body, having traits of both caused mods like his reflexes from his Shibahu heritage to be less acute compared to others thus resulting in the limiting of traits they could add physically and the strength they could give him since he most closely resembled a svatantra he was raised there for the first 4 years of his life believed to actually be one, however when he exhibited his svatantra mods a foster family in the mixed districts took over his care, slightly above average in wealth he slides through life quite easily trying to support those around him; trying to make a difference, and trying to find a new home planet, this being futile considering that he cant leave....

when the Tabari was 13 he started to use his mods unconsciously due to him falling a great distance because of a dare, jumping acrobatically when necessary, which however is not a particularly bad thing.

***Personality
Tabari isn't extremely typical, he is a very caring character and always looks back to help even the lowest of people, he is somewhat comedic making the occasional "That's what she said" joke, but overall he is respectful, he has no real deep-seated problems so he takes many problems well, he has above average intelligence and loves to work with people, good social skills in all not the most athletic person but good to be around.

***Description
Good physical condition, well defined torso, arms, and legs from working in the fields Has very versatile hair a dark blue color

He is only 5'10, very attractive, buzz-cut hair always has sunglasses with him because he wants to see the sun the way his ancestors did, and he has features very strange dut to the engineering a "mood-eye" mod his eyes normally green but can change red, white, or blue strangely his skin his just on the border of tan and under some light he looks a scarlet color, more brownish normal size lips, good eye-lashes and a normal nose

***Mods
though he has many mods they are mostly non-conventional and quite useless
Cat-like reflexes; being able to withstand the shock from long jumps, and running above average speed, night-vision
above average strength
mirror membrane (like a cat) behind his eyes causing him to be able to see light that passes too quickly twice meaning he can see things in his peripheral vision others can't
eyes that change color
able to change the color of things to others eyes
Mod allowing him to feel vibrations on even the bodily scale I.e. if a bug walks in the room he can sense it but he can't detect people's emotions ( I READ THE RULES !!! :0 )
His adaptation mod is probably his most useful allowing him to sustain conditions most would not survive in for almost twice as long I.e. can hold his breath for a longer period of time almost 3 minutes
able to create small scale light shows almost like glowing diagrams of mini-forest and other things as such
can become almost invisible through the same mod that allows his other various controls of light and color
various other flashy light bending skills that are only useful for petty competitions between Svantantra.

***Skills

-exceptionally good at reading peoples faces/body signals
-talking people into smiling
-getting his way through persuasion
-double-jointed
-photographic memory
-can understand Latin and Egyptian
-exceptional various physical talents and analytical skills
-being horrible at sitting down for long periods of time
- drawing

***Goals

- find a new homeland
- become an architect
- find a use for his non-conventional mods

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Thanks for posting your sheet! We just have some edits for you to make so we can approve it and you can start to play.

1. You might want to make sure and go back and read the wiki! While your character can be of a mixed Family origin, please keep in mind the Families are all fairly insular-- they do not tend to interact on that level, and it would be extremely unlikely to be of such mixed blood.

2. Also note that at birth, all Families are of the same genetic origin. No Family is born with extensive modifications. Sitala are not born with mechanical modifications, just as Sihabahu are not born with any physical modifications. Therefor would be little need for a Sitala to manufacture such a child, as they all start the same. The only differences between Families are purely cultural.

3. It is not atypical for someone to be nice. If you mean that he is sympathetic to Danava in particular, please note that this would be extremely unlikely. Danava are thought of as dirty and unclean, and without some sort of life-changing event it is unclear why his views would be different in that way.

4. Sexual jokes about women are frowned upon in this setting. "That's what she said" jokes would be fairly frowned upon, and are very particular to modern America. Please keep that in mind.

5. On the note of his personality, this character seems to lack flaws. It would help greatly if you could round out this personality. Is he lazy or energetic? A perfectionist? Giving flaws goes a long way to making a character seem more real.

6. He would not work in the fields. Only Danava would hold such a position, except as an overseer. The only laborers are Danava. Additionally, at the age of 17 Tabari would not be old enough to have a job of any sort. All persons under the age of 20 are still in the equivalent of high school.

7. Blue hair is not natural to any people.

8. A defined, muscular physique is not considered attractive by Shuri Pura standards, even by Sihabahu.

9. As regards to the mods, please be advised it isn't a good idea to overpower a character! Mods, unless they are purely aesthetic, are of a practical nature. At the age of 17 Tabari would still be a student, and less extensively modded than an adult. Think, what purpose his mods would serve to a student?

10. There is no Latin and Egyptian in this setting for him to understand. It is not currently set on Earth, and Pura Ralasa was never Earth.

11. Please expand the back story. We ask for at least three paragraphs. What was his childhood like? His early adolescence? Who are his parents? Does he have any siblings? Close friends? These sorts of things help round out a character and give a better sense of who they are.

11. Also please look over your sheet for grammar, capitalization, etc.

Once you make those edits, let us know and we'll look over your sheet again! Thanks so much! :3

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